tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post3583484848881743516..comments2023-12-10T19:04:26.773-08:00Comments on Author2Author: He shrugged, she nodded, he laughed...Emily Marshallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07073350248209507278noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post-76828026118977096982010-10-24T15:34:46.012-07:002010-10-24T15:34:46.012-07:00I have no suggestions because I have this same iss...I have no suggestions because I have this same issue with my writing. I tend to have a lot of she noddeds and I looked ups. :)Jengtnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post-44706325376540150572010-10-22T15:47:17.010-07:002010-10-22T15:47:17.010-07:00I'm almost glad not to be alone in this strugg...I'm almost glad not to be alone in this struggle! I'll be checking out Rachel's sites too. Sometimes I'll go back later and add internal dialogue, like the funny comments that occur to my main character that s/he won't say out loud during the conversation.Kate Fallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12856887940900664692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post-23430035324884119492010-10-22T11:14:57.526-07:002010-10-22T11:14:57.526-07:00Well it is difficult but for me is easier when I w...Well it is difficult but for me is easier when I write first all de dialogue then I read it and try to picture in my mind, konowing my characters what they would do to each new phrase. And then I writte all the reactions. Sometimes when I don´t know what to put I make them do something if the scene can take it. Hope it helps!Anabelgonzalezhttp://anabelgonzalez.livejournal.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post-13777168210900693402010-10-22T07:13:52.835-07:002010-10-22T07:13:52.835-07:00I have the same problem. It always feels like my ...I have the same problem. It always feels like my characters are shrugging and nodding at each other.<br /><br />What Jennifer said about giving characters an activity is a good idea, as long as the activity is natural to the scene.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post-2969256051871689522010-10-22T06:44:24.186-07:002010-10-22T06:44:24.186-07:00Oops! I meant, "they're having" (not...Oops! I meant, "they're having" (not their)in my last para.<br /><br />And I will definitely be checking out those websites Rachel mentioned.Jennifer Hoffinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616744694563644199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post-14209985922382593092010-10-22T06:39:51.056-07:002010-10-22T06:39:51.056-07:00First off, I do think you have a good idea about w...First off, I do think you have a good idea about writing out the dialogue first and go back to fill in the rest, esp. if that's the part that flows most naturally to you.<br /><br />Observing real life people and take notes has helped me on occasion. <br /><br />It also helps me to visualize the scene and characters as I write. <br /><br />But I think the easiest, most concrete fix is to give your characters an activity to do together while their having the conversation...first off, it adds more movement to the scene, which is good anyway, and that activity can add a layer to the non-verbal communication (gestures, facial expressions, etc) that you probably couldn't have come up with on your own.Jennifer Hoffinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616744694563644199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3318840210070768346.post-79804793478515390852010-10-22T06:38:29.427-07:002010-10-22T06:38:29.427-07:00Oh I hope I remember to come back to this post lat...Oh I hope I remember to come back to this post later to see any references people suggest. The only thing I am doing to try to help me out of my rut of nodding, smiling, laughing, shrugging, etc IS going through all the books I read (and I read several a week) and writing down any movement or action that stands out to me, is unique or different or really speaks their emotions to me. I have a major list I am compiling with all of these. I am hoping that I won't use these verbatim BUT that they will spark creativity. I also LOVE This site: http://changingminds.org/techniques/body/body_language.htm AND this one: http://changingminds.org/techniques/body/body_language.htm <br />For figuring out movements that correspond to their emotions.Rachel Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02711443001167188505noreply@blogger.com