Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Stunt Princess Teaser

Tip of the Day: If you write romantic elements of any kind, there’s an interesting discussion going on over at Fangs, Fur, Fey on what works and doesn’t.


Following along with our Teaser Week, I’m going to share a scene from the book I’m working on for Fast Draft January. Along with Kate, I’m incredibly nervous to share. Seeing as this is my first public post of any of my work. But getting over fears is the only way to get published, right?

This scene is from a book currently titled STUNT PRINCESS (or Stunt Camp Drama depending on what day you ask) about a fifteen-year old girl whose father owns a Hollywood Stunt Camp.

No normal person should have to be strong every second of the day. Or switch from being a punching bag for thirty screaming nine year olds to demonstrating proper rope repelling techniques, and then fighting off a mob of foreign bank thieves all before noon.

So was it too much to ask that after having my entire world crushed that people would let me be a girl for one minute?

“Do you mind if you have your melt down later?” my best friend Mitchell asked, while attached to a safety harness suspended off the side of the set building. He faced the building façade and switched from holding on with one hand to doing push ups into the open window. “If you don’t jump soon both my arms will fall off.”

Mitchell was completely oblivious—as usual—to how the bomb shell my dad had just dropped was affecting me. Having a guy for a best friend came in handy in numerous situations, but acting as a shoulder to cry on was not one of them.

Trying to wipe my tears away proved useless. My mascara ran down my face, sticking to the caked on foundation. No matter how I tried, I could never get used to all the makeup the director made me wear just in case a piece of my cheek bone got in the picture. Luckily today wasn’t an Injury Shot Day. Because the fake blood would have been a pain to get off if it blended with my salty tears.

“Katie,” Andrew spoke into the megaphone for the second time. “I said action.”

Andrew expected me to fly threw the air with ease. On a normal day it would have been a breeze to jump up and over Mitchell from thirty feet above the ground and land on a yellow X that looked the size of Halley Chaplin’s thighs from this high up. But thinking about that right now was the last thing I wanted to do.

“How could my own father do this to me?”

Walking back down the metal construction stairs was not an option. The set designer stood halfway up blocking my escape exit. He had a roll of duct tape in his hand and patched the flimsy made contraption posing as a building that I stood on.

Seeing that should have made me want to jump, but it didn’t.

“Are you crying,” Mitchell asked, finally looking at me. His breath grew in sharp making his words mumbled as he started to pant. “Kates, I haven’t seen you cry since you took that blow to the head from the two-by-four during our season opener last year. It’s not that bad.”

“Not that bad?” The structure shook with the sharp twist of my entire body in Mitchell’s direction. Before words came out I lost it. My crying turned to huffs filled with anger. Fearing the crew might hear, I fell to the floor and cradled my head in between my knees. The grates from the jump platform dug into my butt, but in a strange way the pitches of pain felt comforting. “He wants me to train Halley Chaplin, Miss New Face of It Girl Cosmetics. To. Take. Over. My. Job.”

Here’s a brief summary of the novel:
Fifteen-year old Katie Markman doesn’t think anything could get worse then being forced to train her archenemy A-list actress Halley Chaplin to take over her job doing stunts on the hit TV show Jr. Super Agents. But when the one person she hates even worse than Halley shows up at Markman Stunt Training Camp her desire to have a quite, drama-free summer is shattered in an instant. Eternal bad-goy Ethan Reynolds brings more to camp than a sulky attitude, tortured family life, and a one kiss fling with Katie last summer. He might just have a few secrets of his own that are ready to bring Katie’s entire world crashing down on her faster than she can say, “action.”

--Emily, Miss Querylicious

Monday, January 19, 2009

Teaser Tuesday All Week Long!

Tip of the Day: Thank you so much everyone for participating in my poll last week! Thanks to your votes, I'm going to start posting book reviews to my LiveJournal. Friend me at http://fallpeople.livejournal.com/.


This week at Author2Author, we're posting snippets of our works in progress. On LiveJournal, there's a tradition called Teaser Tuesday where authors post teaser clips of their manuscripts. We're doing Teaser Tuesday all week long. And some of it are a little nervous about it. Well, I'm a little nervous about it.


When I post a little piece of my work, I always feel like people read it and cringe. I want to say, "No, it's better in context!" And then I think, hey, that doesn't count. If a paragraph can't look good out of context, it must suck. So I've never been a Teaser Tuesday type of person.


However, right now I'm working on a graphic novel script and I really did want to show you all what I'm struggling with in terms of panelling and scripting. So ... Teaser Tuesday. On Monday.


Anyway, I'm using the Dark Horse Comics script submission guidelines. They call for 4-5 panels per page, which seems like too few to me based on what I see in print. But I can't draw myself and I have to start with panelling somewhere. My premise is alternative history. It's 1908 and my setting is Wardenclyffe, Long Island, where Nikola Tesla built an enormous tower to generate worldwide wireless electricity. As the outlets in your house prove, his idea didn't work (or get funded), but in my universe, it did work. Inventors are rushing electric devices to the market to take advantage of the free electricity. In this clip, my main character, Mark Macher, arrives in town with his father, who has been commissioned by Tesla from Thomas Edison for a secret project.

Panel 4:
SMITTY:
SMITTY FARRELSCHMIDT’S THE NAME. EVERYONE KNOWS, YOU NEED ANYTHING IN ELECTRIC CITY, YOU NEED A FARRELSCHMIDT. NOW WHY DON’T YOU LOAD UP MY AUTOMOBILE WITH THOSE SUITCASES, BOY?

Next page:
Panel 1.
Mark is loading the trunk of a Model T like car with his family’s suitcases while the adults watch. The car is pulled up alongside the concrete station platform and waits in the dirt. There is no road. The door of the car is emblazoned with FS in a circle (actually a tire) with lightning bolts emerging from either side of the tire. This is the Farrelschmidt logo.
MR. MACHER (THOUGHT BALLOON):
WHEN YOU NEED ANYTHING BUT A TIMELY RIDE FROM THE STATION. A LATE COACHMAN WHO DOESN’T CARRY BAGS. HAH!

Panel 2.
SMITTY:
EXCUSE ME, MA’AM, FOR NOT TIPPING THE HAT. IF I COULD HELP YOU INTO THE VEHICLE, YOU’LL FIND IT NICE AND COZY. I HEATED IT UP TOASTY FOR YOU.
MRS. MACHER:
OH, THANK YOU, SIR … UM, MISTER …

Panel 3.
SMITTY:
JUST SMITTY, MA’AM. SMITTY FARRELSCHMIDT OF THE ELECTRIC CITY FARRELSCHMIDTS, AND A PLEASURE TO MEET YA. TESLA HIMSELF TOLD US, YOU FARRELSCHMIDTS, YOU TREAT OUR VISITORS FROM MR. EDISON LIKE ROYALTY. YOU DONE THERE, BOY?

Panel 4:
Mark is on his knees peering under the car. A thick cable leads from the undercarriage into a small concrete gully built into the dirt. His eyes are wide.

Next page:
Panel 1:
Smitty has Mark by the collar. Smitty is standing straight and shaking Mark, whose feet dangle a couple inches off the ground. Mark is holding onto his hat so it doesn’t get shaken off.
SMITTY:
THAT’S MY PROPERTY, BOY, YOU DON’T GO CREEPING AROUND IT.
MR. MACHER:
WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? PUT HIM DOWN.

Panel 2.
Unseen by the others, Mark is making a rude hand gesture to Smitty behind his back, or perhaps to his father, or perhaps to both.
SMITTY:
SORRY, UH, MACHER’S THE NAME, RIGHT? EVERY SNOTNOSE KID THINKS HE’S AN INVENTOR AROUND HERE. YOU’LL SEE. A MAN’S GOTTA PROTECT THE FRUITS OF HIS LABOR, RIGHT?
MR. MACHER:
IT’S MR. MACHER, AND I ASSURE YOU, THERE ARE NO THIEVES IN MY FAMILY.

Panel 3:
The family is in the car now—Mrs. Macher in the front passenger seat and Mark and Mr. Macher perched on the higher back bench seat—and Smitty is flipping a large switch on the dashboard from the driver’s seat.
SMITTY:
NO OFFENSE INTENDED, MACHER. ONLY YOU’RE ONE OF EDISON’S MINIONS FROM MENLO PARK, RIGHT?
MR. MACHER:
MR. EDISON, WHO DOES NOT HAVE MINIONS, IS MY EMPLOYER. I’M HERE ON SPECIAL REQUEST OF NIKOLA TESLA AND, BELIEVE ME, WE WON’T BE STAYING LONG. WE’RE CERTAINLY NOT HERE TO PIRATE PLANS FOR AUTOMOBILES.

As you can see, I am now an expert at working the caps lock button! That clip didn't have a captioned panel but at least I worked in a thought balloon for you.

Stay tuned all week for more Teasers and see what we're all cooking up in our secret word labs!

-- Kate, Miss Perfecting the Pages

Friday, January 16, 2009

Please think good book signing thoughts!

Tip of the day: You can read an interview with my fantastic editor from Simon Pulse, Michael del Rosario, HERE.
Wow, it’s the middle of January already. And that means it’s almost January 17th, the day of my book signing at Powell’s books. You may recall I also did a book signing last year on the third weekend of January. Here's a picture of that event:


So how’s it feel to be doing it again a year later? Still exciting and yes, still scary. I’m sure it will be fine. I’ve prepared a little talk to do before I actually sign, so I’m not worried about that. The hardest thing about signings, I think, is that you just so desperately want people to SHOW UP. And by people I mean people other than your immediate family and best friends. 

I’ve been to Powell’s when the room is packed to see a speaker, and it’s so wonderful to see all of those people there to hear an author talk. I’ll be happy if five people come who aren’t there because I twisted their arm.

Since I don’t do many book signings, simply because I don’t have a lot of time with the day job, I tried to get the word out as best I could for this one. Here are some of the things I did:

~ I made up a flyer and sent it via e-mail, as an attachment, to teachers, librarians and other people I know, and asked them to forward to any people they know who might be interested, or to post it if they thought their students might be interested.

~ I sent a less formal e-mail to my book club friends and asked them to forward to any teens or teachers/parents/librarians of teens.

~ I sent postcards I have with my two book covers on the front and put the book signing info on the back and sent it to some Language Arts teachers in town.

~ I also took some postcards and bookmarks to my son’s high school, along with a book I donated. She let me put the postcards and bookmarks on a little table right next to the front door of the library.

~ I put a status update on my facebook page.

~ I sent out a notice to the Oregon SCBWI listserve.

~ I contacted the local newspaper and asked them to list the event. I know the larger Portland Oregonian also put the event in their Sunday living section.

So, with all of that, it’ll be interesting to see how many people show up. Want to guess? Then I’ll tell you next week who was closest.

~Lisa, Miss Crafting a Career

Thursday, January 15, 2009

What Makes a Cool YA Author Web site?

Tip of the Day: The 12 Months of Debsmas starts today! What's this you ask? Well, each month on the year on the 15th, the 2009 Debutantes are giving away a gift bag full of 30 "treats, delights, novelties and oddities donated by the authors of Debut 2009!" So cool, you must check it out!

So lately I’ve been obsessing about my Web site. Translation: nagging my dear husband to make me a New! Cool! Fun! Web site.

It’s not that my Web site is bad or anything. You can look at it—KristinaSpringer.com. It’s just I keep seeing other cooler YA author Web sites and I want mine cooler too (I’m such a follower huh?)

Like, have you seen Cheryl Renee Herbsman, or Stephanie Hale? Or one of my all-time favs, Simone Elkeles? So freaking cute. I would LOVE a site like theirs but maybe I should start with something simpler until I have more books?

I do like the idea of a site where your recent blog posts generate to the front page Like Meg Cabot has, cuz she’s my hero you know. And it provides new content all the time on your page. I noticed Mandy Hubbard’s cute site does this too if you hover over her blog titles. My site has my blog too but it shows too many. Maybe I’ll keep that feature but modify it a bit.

Or maybe I need a cool, beautiful site like Carrie Ryan’s? Though, my books are more light/fun so this might not work.

Ugh. This is hard!

I need something that says cute but isn’t necessarily tied into my book cover or anything. Especially since, I don’t know what my book cover looks like again. Oh yeah, about that. My pub has decided to come up with a brand new cover. Let’s all cross our fingers for super cuteness! But back to web design. Sometimes I think it should tie my main site in with coffee anyway or a café or something. Just because I’m such a coffee freak. But I don’t know. Should I stay away and do something just generically cute?

So anyway, we are still just at the discussion stage of the new site—anyone want to pipe in with some ideas for me?

Kristina, Miss Delighted to Debut

Wednesday, January 14, 2009

I <3 SCBWI (or Am I the only one who doesn't pronounce it "skwee-bee"?)

Tip of the Day: If you fall off the JanNo wagon, don't give up! You're free to change your goal to something you can attain! It's all about getting further than you would have on your project than if you hadn't pushed yourself however much for a month. Current word count: 16,697

The wonderful Amy Emm put together another fantastic SCBWI Central/Western NY conference this past Saturday. I must take the time to highlight certain aspects.

1) Bowen Press editor Molly O'Neil talked about craft and specifically setting, which tied in perfectly to our How I Write series from last week so I was very into it. She had us do an exercise that reminded me of the board game Taboo: we were to write a scene of two friends traveling in the summer in Paris, but couldn't use certain words like cities in France, French terms, "cafe", "baguette", or some other "obvious" terms. We were forced to think out of the box for descriptions of the setting. I loved this exercise and might make myself use it for my future projects. ***Setting used in a first page can establish a character and place for a whole novel. ***Setting can rub against or compliment an MC to show their emotions/personality.

She also said of her imprint that they are still discovering themselves so Bowen Press is open to a wide range of projects. Molly herself is not that into sports stories.

2) London Ladd is a Syracuse illustrator who had an inspiring story. It took him 15 years to get his Bachelor's degree in illustration, and once he did he went back to SU to take a children's PB class which he didn't know anything about -- and then just happened to at that time get an offer to illustrate a PB about Martin Luther King, Jr. He was talented, humble, funny, and a great artist and persenter. ***Don't give up! Take all opportunities that arise!

3) Eileen M. Crane is a Blueboarder and the author of the YA SKIN DEEP. She was warm and friendly and we chatted. I love having the BB connection with authors! She told us about her writing process and about how she won the Delacorte Contest. Some thoughts she shared that stuck with me: ***She writes "unpublishable poetry" to get into the emotions of her characters. ***She equates the elements of fiction with the questions that a reporter has to ask: Who/Character, What/Plot, When/Time Period, Where/Setting, Why/Why Am I Writing This [and I inserted my own thought about Why: Character Motivations], and How/Specific detals that move the plot forward. She said if you don't have a strong WHY [why are you writing this?], it will show in your writing.

4) The First Pages session with Molly was informative. She was blunt but not harsh and she said she'd read on from my first page. Woo hoo! :) A repetitive comment she made for the PBs was that they needed to fill 32 pages, and needed to have enough illustration possibilities to warrant PB status. A repetitive comment she had for the novels was that they needed to start with less description and more action.

As usual, a great conference where I got to chat with a number of people from the Novel Revision Retreat I went to this past fall. So cool to catch up with them and see how their novels are coming along!

Deena, Miss Subbing for Pubbing

Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Storytelling and Sleep

Tip of the Day: If you haven’t seen them already there’s a lot of interesting blog posts from agents this past week about their opinions on writing your own queries. You can check some of them out: here, here, here, and here.

Sometimes when I’m in the middle of writing a book, it becomes all consuming that it makes other tasks such as cleaning, working, watching TV, and even sleeping hard.

It’s during these times I hone my Super Power of zoning out and can actually miss entire conversations because I’m somewhere deep in thought about one of my characters or that pesky plot problem on page 2. My husband tends to hate these times, because he’ll have to repeat himself fifty times when asking the simplest questions such as “can you believe what they just said on the radio?” or even “hello, do you know your name?” Then I start to feel guilty that I’m not paying attention. It’s a vicious cycle.

As annoying as missing conversations is one of the most annoying things about intense writing periods is that is affects my sleep significantly. During this fast draft January, I think more than half the days this month I’ve been up “thinking” (no of course not writing that would be too productive) about my story into the wee hours of the morning. And many days I’m still up when the sun’s rising or even when alarms go off in the morning, which can cause problems when you have to wake up in an hour to go to work.

But hey, that’s the price of writing right?

Usually I’m not too frustrated because a lot of things also affect my sleeping (hello, how many of us have read an un-put-downable book through the night and paid for it the next day?—which has also been a culprit several days this month.)

But this particular writing conundrum is starting to annoy me enough that I decided to compile a list of ways to sleep even when your brain won’t shut up with thinking about the minute details of your story. And I doubted I was the only one in this situation, so I figured I’d share the list with you temporary writing insomniacs out there.

Tips on Getting Sleep During Writing Craziness:

  • Try to do something else non-writing related before bed. Such as enjoying a TV show, music, or something else relaxing.
  • Give yourself permission to stop thinking about your story. Sometimes people (meaning me) get intimidated when thinking of all the amazing people writing out there that they feel like they have to be working, working, working all the time just to turn out something decent. But give yourself permission to take a break. Even if it’s just for a night.
  • Sometimes getting up and writing down what you are thinking will save you lots of time and energy. I discovered this when I was in high school and found if I gave into the writing urge, I could actually sleep. Now I always keep a notebook on my nightstand and usually keep my computer on at night, so it takes less time to power up when I get a particular thought that I have to write down. Because I’ve found if I obsess over mnemonic devices on ways to try to remember this brilliant idea (that never seems to be as brilliant when you read it over the next day, but that’s another story) it takes more time than actually writing it down.
  • That Mountain Dew I had last night was probably a bad idea. ::slaps hand::
  • And finally, I’ve decided I’m going to get a copy of Lisa’s Baby Can’t Sleep book. Which I’ve been a horrible friend and have not read yet (sorry Lisa, will you forgive me?). But it looks like it has fun counting sheep in it and the insomniac sites say that it’s good to have imagery you keep in your head every night that’s the same, so that eventually when you get to a certain image or thought you naturally fall asleep (although, I must not be doing that right, because this has never worked for me). But if I do finally figure it out, funny sheep sound much more fun to think about then boring old numbered sheep.


I’m not sure what it says that I’m making this list at 5:30 in the morning, since I can’t sleep. But my new goal this week is to try the above tips and see if they work. And if you have any other, please leave them for all of us in this situation.

--Emily, Miss Querylicious

Fast Draft January Word Count (which you think would be much higher this week due to the above mentioned problem, but sadly is not)

15640 / 50000 words. 31% done!

Monday, January 12, 2009

Cybils Roundup, Complete with Great Reading

Tip of the Day: If you started out 2009 as saddened as I was by the news of Donald Westlake's death, plan with me to read more of his books this year. There's a great reading list and tribute at http://thebadplus.typepad.com/dothemath/2009/01/donald-e-westlake-1933-2008.html.


So my responsibility as a Young Adult Cybil panelist has come to an end. I worked with six phenomenal panelist readers to come up with seven books to pass onto the final judges. They'll select one of these seven books as the 2009 Young Adult Cybil winner. Our list of seven finalists is ...


AUDREY WAIT by Robin Benway
THE DISREPUTABLE HISTORY OF FRANKIE LANDAU-BANKS by E. Lockhart
I KNOW IT'S OVER by C.K. Kelly Martin
JELLICOE ROAD by Melina Marchetta
SWEETHEARTS by Sara Zarr
TEN CENTS A DANCE by Christine Fletcher
THAW by Monica Roe

Awesome list, isn't it? I'd love to know what you think of those novels while we wait for the winner to be announced. There were over 130 novels nominated this year, and although I personally did not get to read all of them, I read a lot of fantastic books. Narrowing it down to such a short list was a very tough job.

So I'd like to get the word out about the novels I loved that didn't make the short list. I have all sorts of opinions and I'm wondering if there isn't a way for me to share them. And we all enjoy pushing radio buttons, don't we? So here's my poll on how you think I should spread the word about the great books I've read.

What should Kate do with her book reviews?
Post reviews to her LiveJournal.
Find a way to post reviews to Facebook.
Write up a few blog posts with a few books each.
Post reviews to Amazon.
Other (add a comment please).
  
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Let me tell you, I feel totally in-the-loop with what's on the market now and it feels great! I resolve this year to keep reading. It's so inspiring to me how many different kinds of books are published with such varying voices, paces, structures and themes. There is an audience for your book too!


Best of all, I have a fun way to discover new books. I'm following the blogs of my fellow panelists. Here's my first recommended reading--check out these blogs for reviews, giveaways, reading challenges and more:


A Patchwork of Books at http://www.apatchworkofbooks.blogspot.com/
Abby the Librarian at http://www.abbylibrarian.blogspot.com/
Becky's Book Reviews at http://www.blbooks.blogspot.com/
Bookshelves of Doom at http://www.bookshelvesofdoom.blogs.com/
Teen Book Review at http://www.teenbookreview.wordpress.com/
The YA YA YAs at http://www.theyayayas.wordpress.com/


-- Kate, Miss Perfecting the Pages